coucou,

Kylly:
Je n'ai pas lu le texte..... j'ai juste lu ce que Tchoupi a écrit.....


Je ne sais même pas de quel texte il s'agit....


Bisous

euxième texte

Anglais sujet 1

A review of "Super Size Me"



Everything is bigger in America according to Morgan Spurlock, who has crafted a
contemporary horror story by subjecting himself to thirty solid days of a McDonald's-only
diet. Ugh1.
Under the supervision of a cardiologist, a gastroenterologist, a nutritionist and an internist,
Spurlock explores the ritual delights of fast food, an American tradition. As Spurlock's
health deteriorates and his weight and cholesterol balloon, he gives us frightening facts
with the urgency of a dead man walking.
Sixty percent of Americans are overweight; in certain states almost one of four is
considered obese. Couple this with the fact that McDonald's is attempting to Super-size
the planet with their saturated fat-stuffed burgers and fries, and you've got yourself the
makings of an intriguing experiment.
Spurlock's fiancee is horrified by her lover's McDiet. Along with an unhealthy pallor and
flagging energy, Morgan's sex drive is merely a shadow of its former self. His mounting
depression leaves little time for anything but periodic check-ups with his on-call docs,
who are alarmed at the results.
Spurlock gains a hellishly unhealthy seventeen pounds in twelve days (almost twenty five
in 7 o thirty days), while his liver metastasizes into a state of shock from the steady diet of
sugar and fat.
The tension mounts as Spurlock endeavors to complete his investigation while racking up
alarming symptoms that will seriously endanger his health. This film is guaranteed to keep
you from entering a fast-food institutions for years to come.
McDonald's pulls in 46 million suckers2 a day, most of them yearning for3 the comfort and
ease of a fast-food fix4. McD's junk food is worshipped to the tune of 1.4 billion of annual
advertising dollars.
Shortly after the heavy-handed hype of Super Size Me at this year's Sundance Film Fest
(where it won the Director's Award), McDonald's suspended Super-Sizing at all of its fast-
food outlets. A small step for the man (Spurlock) and a big leap for mankind.

http://www.aufiTLUth.com/jeanne/reviews/superSizeMe.html A review of "Super Size
Me", by Jeanne Aufmuth

Ouh ouh les filles vous êtes ou ??

My summary

This text is an article from web site
It was wriiten by Jeanne Aufmuth
The title of this document is a rewiew of "super size me"
This document deals with the bad eating habits

In first, the author explains the experience of mister morgan spurlok
In fact, he décided to eat during thirty solid days of a mac donald's only
Of course, specialist had supervised the experience The specialist are cardiologits ...

In the second part the author point out that 6% of americans are overweight and on of four are fat obese
During this experience, the Spurlock fiancée is disappointed

After the author learn us that spurlock gains seventeen pounds in twelve days
This experience claims to prevent people to eat in a fast food
In the end of this article, the author remind that macdonald is an important investissement mondial

This is interesting, because it denouce the risks of the fat food
In Americ people eat bad feed: pizza hamburgers
So the percent personne overweigh increase
And i think that it is a worrying phenomène, beauce children are in overweigt
So they will have heatlhs problems, as cholesterol, diabete
Howewer the doctors,the autority prevent riks ok the junk food
For example in france, it is advise to eat five vegetables and fruits**To conclude, i will said that is importan to prevent the youngest age of risks of this junk food



Bon si vous avez des questions je suis preneuse

je viens de finir ma gym
j'vais prendre une douche chaude et je m'y colle

bon
a lu le texte, mais m'endors devant le clavier...

je fais ça demain matin!

pas facile non? ou alors c'est qu'il est tard

à demain

coucou les filles,


Tchoupi, toujours à mon humble avis et selon mon anglais....

This text is an article from A web site
It was wriTten by Jeanne Aufmuth

The title of this document is a reView of "super size me" ???? je n'ai pas pu acceder au site.... mais review veut dire revue ??? il y a quelque chose que me gène....
(Pourquoi ne pas utiliser la possession ?? This document's title is....)

This document deals with the bad eating habits

In (je laisserai first ou bien at first ??) first, the author explains the experience of mister morgan spurlok
In fact, he décided to eat during thirty solid days (comprends pas l'expression ???) of a mac donald's only
Of course, specialist had supervised the experience .The specialistS are were cardiologits (les citer)...

In the second part, the author pointS out that 6% of americans are overweight and on of four are fat obese
During this experience, the Spurlock fiancée is disappointed

After the author learnS us that spurlock gains ????? seventeen pounds in twelve days
This experience claims ???? to prevent people to eat in a fast food
In AT the end of this article, the author remindS that macdonald is an important mondial investissement )
(adjectif - nom)
(He, she, it --------S

This is interesting, because it denouceS the risks of the fat FAST ?? food
In AmericAN people eatS bad feed FOOD : pizza, hamburgers...
So the percentAGE OF overweigh personne people increaseS (pas sûre de moi)
And i think that it is a worrying phenomène, beauce children are in overweigt
So they will have heatlhs problems, as cholesterol, diabete...
HoweVer the doctors AND the autority prevent riks oF the junk food
For example in france, it is adviseD (???? je ne sais pas???) to eat five vegetables and fruits**To conclude, i will WOULD saY that IT'S importanT to prevent the youngest age of risks of this junk food

oups, j'ai envoyé avant de finir...

voilà, je pense qu'avec ces quelques modifs...
mais, je pense que tu as un bon niveau.... (sauf si tu triches...)
j'en connais qui au bout de 4 ans ne savent toujours pas faire le résumé d'un texte.... ni même une phrase complexe....

bisous et bon courage...

Hi hi sauf si tu triches, on voit déjà notre maitresse

Non je ne triche pas, je m'aide pour le vocabulaire, car j'ai un manque fou en vocabumlaire, et surtout je mets une heure pour faire cela

c'est gentil de me dire que mon cas n'est pas désepéré, j'essaie aussi de m'enregistrer

Coucou

alors continue.... c'est super.....

je crois qu'on a juste 30 min pour faire le résumer qui doit tenir 5 min... si je me souviens bien....
ensuite questions réponses.....


bisous

Merci kafrine, j'espère que je vais pouvoir m'en sortir le jour là, l'n dernier j'ai eu un malheureux 4, je suis tombée sur les JO

Là il faut que je me prépare pour un texte type grippe a, le sélections aux Etats Unis du président Obama

Si tu as le temps j'ai mis mon résumé sur un nouveau post

coucou,

il est corrigé... selon ce que je dirais moi....

je ne lis pas les textes.... je ne corrige que ton anglais... (sauf si tu me demandes de lire et d'apporter une correction encore plus poussée....)

en fait, je mets ce que je sens plus correct... mais je peux me tromper.... quand je ne suis pas sûre, je mets des ??????

si en plus j'apporte une expliquation... ça doit normalement être bon.....

j'ai toujours eu des bonnes notes en anglais.... le seul reproche que me faisaient tous mes profs d'anglais : accent américanisé....

on est sensés apprendre l'anglais d'Angleterre .... et moi, avec mes cousins américains et canadiens.... j'américanisais tout mon anglais....

pour mon BEP, mon prof m'avait dit : attention et force toi à parler l'anglais d'Angleterre sinon tu auras des points en moins...
le jury lui ne pardonnera pas un accent américain comme moi .....


et oui....

bisous et bonne nuit.... je suis fatiguée....

didoo, si tu veux, je suis en train de travailler sur ce texte:
http://www.ac-grenoble.fr/admin/spip/IMG/pdf/concours/crpe/rapport_jury_session2008.pdf
page 77

Not easy to find the english test.

First, I begin to believe you decided to translate this document in english... you are so courageous and clever.

So, what can you tell me about this extract of Barack Obama's speech?

I worked on marion jones'article...
I only summed up it, I'll try to go on....

This document, entitled "Marion Jones stunned the athletic word", is a press article, from the Daily News, published in October 11th 2007.

Through Marion Jones' disgrace, we are made aware of performance enhancing drugs, by Dinesh Weerawansa.

Indeed, whereas Marion Jones is a superstar of athletic sport since 2000 Summer Olympic Games, sport's world discovered she used drugs to improve her performances.

As we can read on line 10: 'Jones is an athlete who had run from grace to disgrace.

But, she's not the only one, concerned by this problem.

Dinesh Weerawansa cites 2 other athletes: Ben Jonhson and Diego Maradona.

Therefore, all sport's class know doping.

Few years ago, media focused our attention on cycle racing.

Few weeks ago, a tennisman might take crack before an important match.

Although the world sports officials keep a vigilant eye, as explains the journalist, performance enhancing drugs are still relevant today.

To my mind, sport has nothing to win by using drugs... maybe, only money, so long as athletes are not released.

But scientists said, it was dangerous for health...

Recently, we heard about Bernard Hinault's disorder.
Most of journalists said it may be a consequence of a very important use of drugs...

But, doping gives a wrong image of sport.

And we have to protect our children.

A lot of athletes are superstars, and children may do as they do.

We have to be vigilant as parents and as teachers.

To my mind, school can play a role with health education and sport's practices.

Pupils must understand, it's important to take care of their health and their body.

Sport is a way to give the better of one-self, a way to surpass one-self.

Drugs are only a way to win.

bon voilà
je pense pas faire 5 minutes avec ça...
pt'être en hésitant beaucoup!!!!

sinon, j'ai trouvé les sujets de 2007 de l'aca de lyon et j'ai bossé la méthodologie sur les sujet 1,2 et 3
donc j'arrive à préparer en 25/28 minutes
en simple prise de note
et après, ça tient les 5 minutes à l'oral, chrono en main

c'est super facile à la maison...
j'espère que le stress opèrera favorablement demain....

Crois en mon expérience, c'est l'oral qui se rapproche le plus de ta préparation...

Pas de souci, en tout cas, avec ça tu tiens tes 5 minutes sans même hésiter. Ca passe très vite les 5 minutes.

Tu rapproches de ton rôle de parent et de ton rôle d'enseignant en donnant ton avis, c'est le meilleur moyen de palier un creux dans ton résumé.

Franchement ton résumé tient debout et annonce la couleur sur ton niveau.

Pense bien à ton accent et tout est fait.