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**lola91** · Bavard Nombre de messages: 36 Age: 45 Date d'inscription: 29/01/2007

je suis passée
un texte sur jo rowling
auteur d'Harry potter

2 parties du Time
2007December
Harry’s done

When the last battle was over and the last secrets of the seven-book, 17-year journey were spilled, Jo Rowling did what grieving, grateful and emotionally exhausted people do: she ransacked the minibar.

She'd known from the start that Harry Potter would survive his ordeal; the question was how she would handle her own. This time a year ago, she was holed up on deadline in the Balmoral Hotel in Edinburgh to escape the bedlam at home, writing the climactic chapter in which her hero walks into the dark forest to give his life for those he loves. And while she knew that all would be well in the end, "I really was walking him to his death, because I was about to finish writing about him," she says. It's her favorite chapter in her favorite book — but when she finished, "I just burst into tears and couldn't stop crying. I opened up the minibar and drank down one of those pathetic little bottles of champagne.
Mais les questions ne sont pas sur Harry

puis un interview sur l auteur son oeuvre sa célébrité et sa nouvelle richesse

merci pour hier
cela m a permis de voir qu il ne faut pas trainer

kylly

pam73 a écrit:

Ok, je me lance...

The document is a newspaper article. This is an extract from the new york times, in december 2005.
The author raises the problem of addicted to the internet.
In the firts part, the author reveals us that between 6 and 10 percent of the internet users in the USA have a dependancy. The doctor Cash is a specialist of this kind of dependency. He explains us the Mike case, a young man who is addicted to the internet. He focus our attention on the fact that the most of the addicters has other problems like depression, drugs...
It's interesting to note that the most of the internet users isn't addicter. Sara Kieter, a professor of the computer sciences, explains us that we can be addicted ton the internet, but for her, the worst addict is the television.
It's true that now, we can find internet in the most of the house, like television...
To conclue, It makes it clear that to beguin addicted in the internet, people must have other problems.

Reveals TO us
in USA
Mike case
to be addicted to internet
the worst addiction is TV
to conclude

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PE2: SF en CM2 dans le 93
SG1: PS à Villemomble

kylly

Tchoupi a écrit:

This text is an article. It's an extraact from 'New York Times'. It was published in 2005.
The headline is "addicted to the internet"
This document deals with th addiction internet.

This text can be divide into three parts.
In the first, the author talk about th addiction internet in general. He gives the important points
In th second part, he insist on the pathology .
In the third part, he insist on the problems of this addiction

In the firts part, the author said that it exists specials services in the hospital . : for example Internet Addiction disorder. The author stresses the fatc that much people are addicted to the internet.

In the second part, the authordraws that people who are addicted to the internet are people who have others problems
It is a heatlth

Bon voilà, je n'ai pas eu assez de temps

deals with the internet addiction
can be divided
talkS about
the internet addiction in general
he insists on
stresses the fact that = excellente tournure

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PE2: SF en CM2 dans le 93
SG1: PS à Villemomble

kylly

Véropasto a écrit:

lola91 a écrit:

this text is an article adapted from new york times
it was published in 2005
the headline is addicted to the internet and this document deals with internet addiction

the author of new paper ,first showS us Dr cash like mental healTh professionnals . the desease's names is internet addiction disorder
almost 10 per cent of 189 million internet users have (ARE AFFECTED WITH) this dependancy
they noted that people who abuse internet have got many other problems

the author ,in second time , tALkS about Mike whO HAS a high risk OF internet addiction
he has no job, he lives with his mother, he OVERUSES ALCOOL, Drug ? feels depressIVE also he IS sheckING 13 to 15 symptoms .

in 3rd time , the author of N Y times says that Sara Kiesler professor of computer science thinks
that using internet it was noT different to play violon or booling !
she thinks that TV is worsT

Dr Cash is not agree with S.Kiesler .He thinks
that internet addiction is a potentialy serious illness.
but Sara thinks that patients were in GRAVE difficultIES

moi aussi j ai pas fini

bon j'ai tenté de corriger
mais chui pas sûre de tout Embarassed

voilà
have a good night!

OK

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PE2: SF en CM2 dans le 93
SG1: PS à Villemomble

**Véropasto**

c'est vrai???
j'attendais un peu flippée que tu corrige ma correction lol!

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**Véropasto**

il me manque le H de alcohol!

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kylly

isa56 a écrit:

Bon, je me lance malgré mon retard : invasion de poux, de linge, enfants excités....

The text is a press article from The New York Times , it was published in 2005.
This article raises the problem of internet addiction.
According to Dr Cash, a doctor of Internet Addiction Services, this pb becomes important because it represents about 10 % of computer users in the USA. This addiction can be compared to alcoholism and drug addiction. Therefore, it can becomes a real society pb !
Severals health professional say that others pb like depression or anxiety go with this illness.
The journalist take the example of Mike, who have 13 symptoms of the addiction like alcoholism and drug abuse and depression. And it's not a single case !
So, some therapists are treating internet addicts like chemical addiction.
In this article, there is an other point of view, it's sara kiesler's, who is professor of computer. She's not agree with Dr Cash and say that TV addiction is worse.
But 10 years' experience of Dr Cash show that internet addiction is a serious illness because it can destroyed households. Moreover the number of patients increases, despite they just consult sprots and news sites.
The journalist introduce 2 points of view about internet addiction.
In my mind, Dr Cash's view is more serious and proved.
But I'm not really convinced that TV addiction is worse than internet addiction and , nevertheless, I think that's not a reason not to take measures to stop this pb.

Bon, je suis un peu limitée en expressions, j'ai du mal a exprimé mon point de vue. Je vais voir ce que vous avez fait !

this pb is becoming important
it can destroy
the journalist introduces

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PE2: SF en CM2 dans le 93
SG1: PS à Villemomble

kylly

Véropasto a écrit:

c'est vrai???
j'attendais un peu flippée que tu corrige ma correction lol!

oui oui j'trouve ta correction très bonne

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PE2: SF en CM2 dans le 93
SG1: PS à Villemomble

**Véropasto**

ben merci

si on m'avait dit que j'arriveari à corriger un truc en anglais ya encore quelques semaines... je crois que j'en aurai pleuré de rire Embarassed

merci!

tu vois tchoupi.... ya de l'espoir pour chacune d'entre nous avec cette foutue langue!

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**Véropasto**

merci beaucoup en tout cas de prendre tout ce temps kylly

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**pam73**

Merci beaucoup Kylly!!!

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Pam, heureuse maman de Grégory né le 5 septembre 2004, de Nathan, né le 9 mars 2006, et de Jade, née le 13 septembre 2009.
CRPE: sciences en majeur, LDJ, anglais et 1500m.

**isa56**

Alors là, je suis VACHEMENT contente !!! 3 fautes seulement en étant speed !!! C'est vrai que je n'ai pas développé mon argumentation mais quand même !!
Ouf ! Mon petit monstre a failli faire tomber mon ordi !!!! Il s'est pris le pied dans le fil et j'ai réussi à le rattraper de justesse ! Du coup je ne sais plus ce que je voulais dire ! Ca ne devait pas être très important!!
Oui !! A quand le prochain ex du style ????
Je suis partante quand vous voulez !

**Véropasto**

isa j'ai mis un nouveau sujet dans talk si tu veux!

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**isa56**

Ce soir tchat d'anglais à 21h pour ceux que ça intéresse !
Tchoupi, comment ça marche le tchat ???

**Véropasto**

comment ça comment ça marche??

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